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zuluDear Short Story I Should Have Finished A Week Ago,
You are plotted. I know what happens. I know why it happens. I have some lovely characters all thought out. I have given them goals to achieve and emotional conflict about those goals. Admittedly, setting's a little shaky, but all in all, you have some nice worldbuilding details.
After some nine days of intermittent effort, you are EIGHTY-NINE WORDS LONG.
If you are not finished TODAY, we will miss a very important deadline. You don't want that, do you? Come on, what's approximately 4911 more words between friends?
Hoping you will shape up,
Me
You are plotted. I know what happens. I know why it happens. I have some lovely characters all thought out. I have given them goals to achieve and emotional conflict about those goals. Admittedly, setting's a little shaky, but all in all, you have some nice worldbuilding details.
After some nine days of intermittent effort, you are EIGHTY-NINE WORDS LONG.
If you are not finished TODAY, we will miss a very important deadline. You don't want that, do you? Come on, what's approximately 4911 more words between friends?
Hoping you will shape up,
Me